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May 10, 2010
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In your eyes
I see heaven's gates
Surrounded by all the stars in the sky
In your hands
are roses
Mirrors of my heart

The Twinkling stars freeze time
So here we can stay
Together forever
Forever perfect.

There is love in your eyes
Eternity on your lips
So here we stay
Together forever
Forever perfect

Your heart is true
As is mine
Can't you see
That we're meant to be
Together forever
Forever perfect.
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:iconz-wolf:
I've read a few of you other poems, and I have to say this is by far my favorite. You seem to inject a lot more imagery into it. It would be interesting to see a rhyming poem.
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~Elira-Valdete May 12, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you ^_^ all of my poems I've put up thus far are from around 3-6 years ago, so I'm spending this summer getting back into poetry and getting back my creative spark that college has slowly killed @_@
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Yeah, that spark is hard to get back one ollege drives it from you. Hence the gap between my lyrics. XD
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~Elira-Valdete May 12, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
College has been the second unhappiest time of my life... the first being middle school, fist only because I had No friends versus my few friends that I've kept now. BUT I'm transferring schools and I should be able to pursue a minor in creative writing to go with my music major.
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Creative writing was a component of one of my college programs. I hope you get the same joy I did out of it.
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